Introduction:
“I
am the better writer, she the better critic…. and together we have made
arguments that have stood unshaken by the storms of thirty long years; argument
that no man has answered.”
Elizabeth Cady Stanton, Lucretia Mott, and others helped lay
the foundation for the woman’s rights movement which would issue its first
manifesto, the famous “Declaration of Rights and Sentiments”
at
http://www.pbs.org/stantonanthony/
Not for ourselves alone,
background information
final
Battleground,
http://gos.sbc.edu/c/casey.html
General
Background of the Women’s Rights Movement
http://www.ioba.org/newsletter/archive/v9/suffrage10-02.html
Library of
Congress materials related to
http://memory.loc.gov/cgi-bin/query/h?ammem/mnwp:@field(DOCID+@lit(mnwp000288))
Political Science
Quarterly – regarding Wilson, Paul and the Suffrage movement
http://www.jstor.org/pss/2149723
Biography of
Alice Paul
http://www.alicepaul.org/alicepaul.htm
http://www.lkwdpl.org/wihohio/paul-ali.htm (also has additional links for A.P)
Biography of Lucy
Burns
http://www.pocanticohills.org/womenenc/burns.htm
http://memory.loc.gov/ammem/collections/suffrage/nwp/profiles.html
Biography of
Carrie Lane Chapman Catt
http://www.lkwdpl.org/wihohio/catt-car.htm
http://www.northnet.org/stlawrenceaauw/catt.htm
Picture gallery
of the 1913 Suffrage march – several links
http://womenshistory.about.com/lr/women_s_suffrage_pictures/285176/1/
Living the Legacy: The Women's Rights Movement 1848 – 1998,
excellent background information
http://www.legacy98.org/move-hist.html
National Archives
– primary sources focused on Anti- suffrage
http://www.archives.gov/education/lessons/woman-suffrage/
Background on Alice
Paul, suffrage and Wilson
The Trials of Alice
Paul and other NWP members
http://law.jrank.org/pages/2806/Trials-Alice-Paul-Other-National-Woman-s-Party-Members-1917.html
Background on the
Wilson Administration and its relationship to Suffrage
http://cnx.org/content/m19719/latest/
Background on the
Anti-suffragists
A series of documents related
to the women’s movement
http://marchand.ucdavis.edu/lessons/suffrage/suffrage.html
A current article discussing the history of
“Night of Terror” at Occoquan Workhouse and a memorial to the Silent Sentinels
http://www.nbcwashington.com/news/local-beat/A-Memorial-to-Womens-Crusaders-110962649.html
Evaluation:
Topics |
Extraordinary 100 |
Accomplished 90 |
Competent 80 |
Unsatisfactory/ Incomplete |
Introduction
and Thesis |
Distinct tone; unmistakable intent;
uniform specificity; stylish opening; solid thesis |
Clear tone; evident intent; limited
specificity; effective opening; confident thesis; |
Restatement of prompt as opening statement;
mechanical thesis statement; some specificity; limited attempts at tone |
Objective, dull tone; vague or absent
thesis; general statements; lack of specificity; lifeless, ordinary language |
Ideas and
Argument |
Interesting; clear;
thought-provoking; reasoned; sophisticated; insightful; 3 interviews; 2
quotes |
Thoughtful; mature; reasoned;
interesting; understandable;3 interviews; 2 quotes |
Sound; limited in depth; appropriate
but inadequately developed; 2 interviews; |
Obvious; shallow; unsound;
inaccurate; clichéd |
Support (evidence
and illustrations) |
Accurate; forceful; rich in detail;
extensive; convincing; specific |
Thorough; persuasive; specific;
clear; complete |
Appropriate; sufficient; relevant;
clear; mostly general |
Inappropriate; vague; incomplete; general |
Organization |
Stylish transitions; unity; coherence
of sentences and paragraphs; clear focus; careful and subtle organization
subordinate to meaning and ideas; chronological |
Effective transitions; coherent
paragraphs; unmistakable focus; careful organization subordinate to meaning
and ideas; chronological |
Clear transitions; mostly coherent
paragraphs; reasonable focus; ideas subordinate to organizational devices;
mostly chronological |
Vague or unclear focus; random,
loose, choppy structure; limited attempt to organize; |
Syntax and
Expression |
Varied sentence beginnings and
lengths; command of stylistic techniques; interesting, original delivery; no
wasted words |
Sentence variety; some attempts at
style; clear, noteworthy delivery; few wasted words |
Effective sentence structure; some
variety; some lapses in syntax; wordy |
Simplistic dull, ordinary syntax and
expression; repetitious; fragments and run-ons; wordy |
Diction and
Usage |
Rich, precise and effective
vocabulary; fresh and intense language and imagery; use of strong action
verbs; confident active voice |
Effective vocabulary; accurate word
use; use of action verbs and active voice |
Adequate vocabulary; reliance on
verbs of being and passive voice; thesaurusitis; some problems with usage |
Inappropriate or immature vocabulary;
incorrect word choice; word omissions; errors in agreement; inconsistent
tenses |
Conclusion |
Stylishly and subtly culminates by
further developing main idea; effective specificity; leaves a pleasing
impression on the reader |
Returns to thesis and summarizes main
points clearly; some specificity; solid sense of finality |
Ends effectively; summarizes
previously stated materials; at least briefly returns to thesis or main idea |
Fails to conclude; repeats previously
stated information; adds nothing new in many words |
Voice |
Command of voice appropriate to
audience and topic; strong; authoritative; authentic; distinctive |
Clear; authentic; appropriate to
audience and topic; confident; consistent |
Consistent but somewhat mechanical;
uninteresting; basic and typical |
Inconsistent; indefinite;
unauthentic; inappropriate to audience and/or task |
Mechanics |
Error free |
Mostly error free |
Some bothersome errors in spelling
and punctuation |
Mechanical errors which interfere
with communication and/or meaning |
Works Cited |
Sources are important, ample, varied
and documented correctly. |
Sources are mostly important,
adequate, varied and mostly documented correctly. |
Sources are basic, and acceptable,
but not varied and not always documented correctly. |
Sources are basic, inadequate, not
varied and not documented correctly. |
http://webpages.charter.net/jcala6/website/rubrics.html#writing
Modified 2010 by
Associated Standards: (NYS
& National)
NYS #1 History of the
Students will use
a variety of intellectual skills to demonstrate their understanding of major
ideas, eras, themes, developments, and turning points in the history of the
NYS #5 Civics, Citizenship, and Government
Students will use
a variety of intellectual skills to demonstrate their understanding of the
necessity for establishing governments; the governmental system of the
National
Standards for History
Era 4- Expansion and Reform (1801-1861)
Standard 4C
- Demonstrate understanding of changing gender roles and ideas and activities
of women reformers.
Era 7 - Emergence of Modern
Standard 3D
- Demonstrate understanding of politics and international affairs in the 1920s.
The
teaching activities also correlate to the National Standards for Civics and
Government
Standard II.D.5 -
Evaluate, take, and defend positions on what the fundamental values and
principles of American political life are and their importance to the
maintenance of constitutional democracy.
Standard V.B.2. -
Evaluate, take, and defend positions on issues regarding political rights.
English Language Arts Learning Standards
Standard 1
Students
will read, write, listen and speak of information and understanding. As listeners and readers, students will
collect dat, facts and ideas; discover relationships,
concepts and generalizations; and use knowledge generated from oral, written
and electronically produced texts. As
speakers and writers they will use oral and written language to acquire,
interpret, apply and transmit information.
Standard 2
Students
will read, write, listen and speak for literary response and expression. Students will read and listen to oral,
written and electronically produced texts and performances, relate texts and
performances to their own lives and develop and understanding of the diverse
social historical and cultural dimensions the texts and performances
represent. As speakers and writers
students will use oral and written language for self-expression and artistic
creation.
Standard 3
Students
will read, write, listen and speak for critical analysis and evaluation. As listeners and readers, students will
analyze experiences, ideas, information and issues presented by others using a
variety of established criteria. AS
speakers and writers, they will present, in oral and written language and from
a variety of perspectives, their opinions and judgments on experiences, ideas,
information and issues.
Conclusion:
“When you put your hand to the plow, you can’t
put it down until you get to the end of the row.” Alice Paul
At the end
of this exercise you will have expanded your understanding of the Women’s
Suffrage Movement from 1848 through to 1920.
Elizabeth Cady Stanton and others lit the torch and Alice Paul and her
generation carried it to the “end of the row.”
However the struggle continues as the task of gaining equal rights for
women is an ongoing exercise. We will
continue to study the impact women have had on American culture throughout the
20th and 21st centuries.